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Mostly out of my control *NEWEST*
You want things to happen,
And you want them to happen now.
You want to be different,
Hating yourself and the life around you.
Life seems too much,
It seems to kick you when your lowest.
All you want to do is kick life back
And make life know how you feel.
How do you change something
That is out of your control.
Chemicals misbalancing in your brain.
Now that is uncontrollable.
Medication helps a lot,
Though the trick is to get it right.
Get the right balance
And motivation starts to rise,
Then the smiles sneak up on you.
The world sure is looking brighter lately.
Brighter even though it still pours.
There will still be downs,
But the good sure seems to
Out way the bad lately.
Hope had finally returned,
A long lost friend I realise was missed.
Finally my happy little pal is back home.
Now to see what life throws next.
(C) Cindy Richmond
28 September 2011
And you want them to happen now.
You want to be different,
Hating yourself and the life around you.
Life seems too much,
It seems to kick you when your lowest.
All you want to do is kick life back
And make life know how you feel.
How do you change something
That is out of your control.
Chemicals misbalancing in your brain.
Now that is uncontrollable.
Medication helps a lot,
Though the trick is to get it right.
Get the right balance
And motivation starts to rise,
Then the smiles sneak up on you.
The world sure is looking brighter lately.
Brighter even though it still pours.
There will still be downs,
But the good sure seems to
Out way the bad lately.
Hope had finally returned,
A long lost friend I realise was missed.
Finally my happy little pal is back home.
Now to see what life throws next.
(C) Cindy Richmond
28 September 2011
Feedback I have received on this poem.
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Lukerudd94: I like this and how you decide to end it on a positive note which makes a change compared to a lot of depressing gloomy kind of poems I've recently read. I also think it flows quite well but I'm loving the whole optimism as the poem progresses. Nice job
Lukerudd94: I like this and how you decide to end it on a positive note which makes a change compared to a lot of depressing gloomy kind of poems I've recently read. I also think it flows quite well but I'm loving the whole optimism as the poem progresses. Nice job